Preliminary exercise learner response
CRIME SCENE 1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Seriously impressive prelim: so much credit here! Music, dialogue, costume, camera shots, editing - all very impressive! The focus pull at the end is just superb. Casting also excellent - combined with costume it is convincingly in terms of detectives investigating a crime. Audio - music a little loud over the dialogue? Also a little echo on dialogue but that may simply be location. Was the switch to homicide for main detective too quick? It was the one bit I wasn't totally convinced by. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. WWW: Good mise-en-scene, camerawork, editing and narrative. Good cast EBI: Audio for dialogue was low due to the echo and the music was too high. 3) How effectively did you comp